Friday, 27 September 2019

Slow writing About Matariki

We are learning to do slow writing. First you have to choose a topic. Then you start your first sentise with a did you know sentise.

Did you know you plant to cellerbrate Matariki?
Up above in the sky the seven stars shine.
A close claster of seven starfishs.
Bright stars shining like a torch.
Planting medeim sized papery cloves of garlic.
Gently push the clove in.

Spicy garlic.
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  1. Matawai Blog Admin1 October 2019 at 08:05

    Kia ora Blair,
    I liked the way you wrote descriptively in this piece fo slow writing especially the phrase "close cluster".
    Is the garlic growing? When will it be ready to harvest?
    Mā te wā
    Mrs Torrie

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